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developinginnerpeace.com

作者:@grinnerpeace
    2017-05-15 08:54:05.286Z

    Go here: developinginnerpeace.com

    Then answer these qestions and follow the instructions below:

    1. What do you think the website is about? (your first impression)
    2. What do you want to do at this website? Do that, and describe your experience.
    3. Is there anything that makes you feel frustrated or confused?
    4. Any ideas, suggestions, or advice?
    • 7 回复
    1. K
      @KajMagnus
        2017-05-23 13:53:04.228Z2017-05-23 14:02:53.028Z

        I think it's a course about how to discover one's spiritual side. However, is it an online course? Or is it in some city? If so, which country

        I want to click "Introducing the course". Ok. Now I did that, and ended up here: https://developinginnerpeace.com/introduction.php. ... Hmm that page feels a bit like a wall of text. I read a bit ...

        This sounds interesting:

        This course is for anyone who has started to wonder if there might be more to life than our ‘threescore years and ten’ on planet Earth; anyone who has started to question traditional beliefs and teachings; anyone who feels there is a purpose to their life but can’t fathom out what it is or how to get started

        but it's a bit down the page. To me, the page would be more interesting, if it started with that text.

        I feel a bit frustrated because there's so much text to read. And I'm unsure about where on Planet Earth the course happens. Or if it's over the internet.

        Ideas/suggestions: On the Introducing the Course page: Perhaps add images? The images could be of people taking the course? Perhaps they do some yoga exercise, then you could inser photos about that. Or perhaps a picture of someone reading at his/her computer and looking relaxed. + pictures of beautiful landscapes & sunsets/sunrises = feels related to a meaningful life, to me.

        1. G@grinnerpeace
            2017-05-23 14:17:25.546Z

            Hi there. Thanks for the feedback. You're right there is a lot of text and we do need to look at ways to break it up. I appreciate your taking the trouble to look and give feedback.

          • K
            @KajMagnus
              2017-05-23 13:55:55.753Z

              What does "threescore years and ten" mean? Does it mean 110 years? But most people don't get that old?

              1. G@grinnerpeace
                  2017-05-23 14:23:30.777Z

                  Hah! I thought this was a common phrase meaning the normal span of life when the term was first used. A score is 20, so 3 score and 10 is 70. Having investigated further I see the term comes from the Bible. Again, thanks for taking the trouble to look.

                • T
                  Tyler Langan @tyler
                    2017-06-14 07:47:03.748Z

                    I love the navbar (lol). It's so simple!

                    I saw the cost and was like whoaaa... And then I left the site.

                    1. B
                      Bernard @bernard
                        2017-06-14 09:39:46.663Z

                        Hi there, please see my feedback on this page:

                        1. I assume the page is a landing page/promo page for a spiritual course that you guys run and it allows people who are interested in it to register and join the course.
                        2. I wanted to find out what the course is about in the detail, so I click on the "introduce the course" but it's filled with plenty of text and I'm not really in the mood to read a lot. I'm skimming through the page, having a stop at the list of the modules and checking a few of them to get the idea about the course. Then in the next step I'm going back to the main page and trying to see details of Module 1, but again I see just a plenty of undifferentiated text paragraphs (ok, you alternate between white and purple backgrounds, but no lists, no pictures, no highlights, no tables, nothing where the eyes could rest a bit) so I skim through the page rather quickly and jump out.
                          Here I'd say it depends on what is your target audience. Let me explain on an example - recently I found a very good page where a car engineer was explaining specifics of nascar racing brakes on a race car. There was a lot of value in the text and I was very interested in the topic, and I enjoyed reading it despite the fact that the user experience was terrible, it was just a wall of text and I can't imagine who else would read it - other then hard-core car enthusiasts. What I'm trying to say is if you want to attract people who are enthusiasts in the spiritual topic, it just might work. If you are trying to get an average person to sign up for your course, that will most likely not work.
                        3. So besides the walls of text I'd consider changing the page design. It looks old and/or done unprofessionally. Such a page like this you can get done on upwork fairly cheaply (also considering how much you charge for the course itself).
                        4. Regarding the charge - I'd choose paypal for the payments and that would do an automatic conversion between the currencies, so you don't have to list all the currencies you accept and different prices in each of them. Also paypal is a very convenient way to pay (from my perspective).
                        1. G@grinnerpeace
                            2017-06-14 12:44:24.110Z

                            Thank you for your really helpful feedback. Much appreciated.